lyric help again

[valvetronix]

i keep getting these songs... that i want to add more to, but i cant think of anything else! ideas!?!?!?

Ghost

Ghost
That things for morners
Come visit with me in my time of torment

I may not want them here
If all is gone
And its to late
Shes beyond my reach

Scars
Can be stronger
Many on their places across your heart


I may not live with this
And still be me

Fear
That history repeats

And now ill stand before I fall again
Only some days I don’t know why

Ghost
That things for morners
Haunt me everyday until I die
Ghosts
On greener mornings
Haunt me everday until I die

Silence
Still speaks to me
It says the harshest words of all

[mrboston]

I'd have to hear the vocal melody to be of any help- but I've be happy to give it a shot. Have you recorded any preliminary versions of this yet? Can you post a link?

[corso]

valvetronix said:

I may not live with this
And still be me

And now ill stand before I fall again
Only some days I don’t know why

Silence
Still speaks to me
It says the harshest words of all

These are all excellent phrases!

[valvetronix]

mrboston said:

I'd have to hear the vocal melody to be of any help- but I've be happy to give it a shot. Have you recorded any preliminary versions of this yet? Can you post a link?

Nope I dont, but im thinking about just doing a acoustic track and vocal track, so i could record it pretty quick and easy to give ya an idea

[T BAG]

Farts
Why you stink
When I'm with you I can't think